Join for FREE | Take the Tour Lost Password?
[x]

deviantART

 
©2009-2010 =ersi
:iconersi:

Artist's Comments

:heart:

Critiques


:iconxraynet:
Overall, I like the concept of this piece, but it has some discordant elements that don't add much and are distracting. the flower images in the foreground have a great painterly effect and utilize the distorted edge effects possible with the latest versions of UF. The central pink pearl, because it is so sharply defined, doesn't continue the painterly look and directs the viewer to the center instead of the flower petals. Also, the celtic knot structures in the background are sharply geographic and, therefore, also discordant with both other background layers and the main flower elements of the piece.

It would be nice to see how this would look by eliminating the celtic knot portion of the background and by distorting the edges of the pink pearl flower centers. I have always admired your painterly style and thought it more artistic than my own sharply graphic pieces. Perhaps that's why I find this piece somewhat jarring rather than restful. :)
The Artist thought this was FAIR
2 out of 3 deviants thought this was fair.

Thank you for your Critique

You are not logged in.

Comments


love 0 0 joy 0 0 wow 0 0 mad 0 0 sad 0 0 fear 0 0 neutral 0 0
:icon50calwolf:
very nice!

--
"When life gives you lemons, make orange juice and leave the world wondering how the hell you did it"
:iconkurios-kat:
a fractal watercolour.:clap:
:iconersi:
That's the idea, thanks! :aww:

--
:bulletred: First comes the feeling. The idea follows. :bulletred:
:iconersi:
:iconkissingplz:

--
:bulletred: First comes the feeling. The idea follows. :bulletred:
:iconersi:
Thanks lots, Andrey! :iconcocoloveplz:

--
:bulletred: First comes the feeling. The idea follows. :bulletred:
:iconzoozee:
Great work :heart:

--
:star: Have a terrific day :star:

zoozee :rose:
:iconersi:
Thank you! :hug:

--
:bulletred: First comes the feeling. The idea follows. :bulletred:
:iconkayandjay100:
I think it's quite lovely, Ersi ~ and I'm attracted by the discordant elements ~ makes the image unique! :deviation: :rose: Coco

--
Do you ever get a feeling ~ that just beyond the city lights ~ there must be a new horizon?

Proud member of:
=FracMan [link]
*Ultra-Fractal [link]
*FractalDreams [link]

Details

August 31, 2009
13.1 MB
237 KB
800×800

Statistics

13
31 [who?]
146 (3 today)
0 (0 today)

Share

Link
Embed
Thumb

Site Map